Hello,my chinese name is ZhongYing and my English name is Sue.
大家好，我的中文名叫钟滢，英文名叫SUE。
I have two small eyes and a little nose.
我有两个小小的眼睛和一个小小的鼻子。
I'm good at talking,so my mother says I have a big mouth.But that's certainly not true.
我能说会道，所以我妈妈说我有个大嘴巴（“have a big mouth”在英文上有多嘴的意思）这当然不是真的。
I like pink.so every thing(这两个词应该连一起) about me is pink---pink shoes,pink dress,pink bag and a beautiful pink pencilcase. And when I smile,you can see my small pink liltte face.
我喜欢粉红色，对于我来说我的每件东西都是粉红色的----粉红色的鞋子、粉红色的裙子、粉红色的书包、还有粉红色的铅笔盒。当我微笑时，你还可以看到我的小脸蛋红朴朴的。
I like singing ,dancing,and I really like dressing up,I can dress up like an English lady if I wear my mother's shoes and cloths,you see!
我喜欢唱歌、跳舞，我还特别喜欢打扮。当我穿上我妈妈的衣服和鞋子时我就像英国的贵夫人一样，你看！
I'm not clever like Tomas Edison,and I'm not beautiful like Maliy Melu.（Marilyn Monroe）but I'm happy!I enjoy my life,not like someone that often feels sad,And I'm interested in writing and dancing, sining and painting,（这里把and dancing, sining 去掉避免跟前面重复，原文留着BOTH更好）and I also like to imagine things.
我没有爱迪生那样聪明，也没有玛丽莲·梦露（美国著名演员自己乱拚拚错了）那样漂亮，但我快乐！我享受我的生活，不像有的人整天愁眉苦脸一点也不开心。我喜欢唱歌和跳舞，写作和画画，我还喜欢想象。
What do I imagine? I imagine when I grow up, and I'll be a chinese teacher in America,and that's what my dream.
我想象什么呢？我想象当我长大时我会在美国当一位中文老师，这就是我的梦。
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